dear Orly,
This week i read I Fooled You!
I think this is a funny book.
It takes parts from other books that have pranks.
Some they made up using characters from other books.
In the beginning there was a really cute and funny poem.
I would recommend my little sister to read this because she would crack up.
I got some ideas how to prank my sisters.
I liked the way the author wrote this.
It is very interesting reading about your hobby.
I really got into this book and i think its one of the best ones i read for Mrs.Zrihens class.
Thanks to Ms.Lemos i have his book.
I really enjoyed this book and i think you will too!
Love,
dana yeoshoua
Sunday, December 18, 2011
Monday, December 12, 2011
Blog #15 The girl who could fly
Dear Sharon,
i kept reading the girl who could fly.
This book is ok.
So piper goes to the Fourth of July Fair and imagines it to be perfect Meeting new people.
When the day had come Melie the one who makes all the rumors told Pipers mom that her daughter has a big problem in the head. Her mom ignored her because she knew its not true but regret bringing piper here.
Piper got along with Sam Melies daughter. Until piper told her her name. Sam said that she had a problem in her head thats what her mom said.
Piper got mad and Sams older bothers came and started hitting Piper until she fell to the ground.
Piper didnt cry.
When she went to play baseball with all the other kids she was last to be picked and had to be on jimmys team.
No one wanted Piper.
Jimmy was a girl that didnt like being a girl.
She wanted to win but had doubt since piper was on her team.
Piper got out of the pitching job because both captains agreed to kick her out.
Her parent were sad and hopeless.
Thats all i could read and understood.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
i kept reading the girl who could fly.
This book is ok.
So piper goes to the Fourth of July Fair and imagines it to be perfect Meeting new people.
When the day had come Melie the one who makes all the rumors told Pipers mom that her daughter has a big problem in the head. Her mom ignored her because she knew its not true but regret bringing piper here.
Piper got along with Sam Melies daughter. Until piper told her her name. Sam said that she had a problem in her head thats what her mom said.
Piper got mad and Sams older bothers came and started hitting Piper until she fell to the ground.
Piper didnt cry.
When she went to play baseball with all the other kids she was last to be picked and had to be on jimmys team.
No one wanted Piper.
Jimmy was a girl that didnt like being a girl.
She wanted to win but had doubt since piper was on her team.
Piper got out of the pitching job because both captains agreed to kick her out.
Her parent were sad and hopeless.
Thats all i could read and understood.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Sunday, December 11, 2011
Date:12/11/11
Name:Dana Yeoshoua
Current Events Journal 3
Title: Animal Shelters behavior experts face life and death decisions for animals
Author: John Owens
Source: The Miami Herald
The topic of the article is Animals life or death
The main idea of the article is: (implied/stated)Stated.This article is about animals behavior that leads to life or death depending the results of his behavior.
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to excluding a detailed article teaching and telling readers about animal care.
The author’s perspective in this article is objective (biased) because he is not there to see how the animals feel.
The pattern of organization of the article is quotes of experienced people
The reason the author chose this pattern for the article is because those experts know how everything goes and is like they are saying the article just in broken pieces details one by one.
The text features included in the article are:quotes which helps by getting more visualize , and helps by getting more information.
This article is about animals that get treated with a test. this test tells if your animal has a chance to live a normal creatures life.If the animal passes it goes to adoption. If the animal does not pass in has to go through DEATH.It tells how the vets and workers have a hard time killing this beautiful animal.Some examples and opinions were included.
The significance of this article is what others feel and understanding why some animals are put to sleep and the explanation.
What I learned from this article is that animals have many reasons to get put to sleep.
What I liked about this article is that some people with experience told their stories
What I did not like about it was telling why they are put to sleep and some sad stories.
Who should read this article and why ?
my grandpa should read this because he likes learning new things especially about animals and science.
This article reminds me of my dog that i gave away.
"how to speak dog"
Many dog sicknesses.
New vocabulary I learned
Word Context Clues Meaning
1.cat
2.they have
3.establish-animal
Name:Dana Yeoshoua
Current Events Journal 3
Title: Animal Shelters behavior experts face life and death decisions for animals
Author: John Owens
Source: The Miami Herald
The topic of the article is Animals life or death
The main idea of the article is: (implied/stated)Stated.This article is about animals behavior that leads to life or death depending the results of his behavior.
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to excluding a detailed article teaching and telling readers about animal care.
The author’s perspective in this article is objective (biased) because he is not there to see how the animals feel.
The pattern of organization of the article is quotes of experienced people
The reason the author chose this pattern for the article is because those experts know how everything goes and is like they are saying the article just in broken pieces details one by one.
The text features included in the article are:quotes which helps by getting more visualize , and helps by getting more information.
This article is about animals that get treated with a test. this test tells if your animal has a chance to live a normal creatures life.If the animal passes it goes to adoption. If the animal does not pass in has to go through DEATH.It tells how the vets and workers have a hard time killing this beautiful animal.Some examples and opinions were included.
The significance of this article is what others feel and understanding why some animals are put to sleep and the explanation.
What I learned from this article is that animals have many reasons to get put to sleep.
What I liked about this article is that some people with experience told their stories
What I did not like about it was telling why they are put to sleep and some sad stories.
Who should read this article and why ?
my grandpa should read this because he likes learning new things especially about animals and science.
This article reminds me of my dog that i gave away.
"how to speak dog"
Many dog sicknesses.
New vocabulary I learned
- dementia
- protocol
- rapport
Word Context Clues Meaning
1.cat
2.they have
3.establish-animal
Monday, December 5, 2011
Blog #14: The girl who could fly
Dear Ethan,
Last week i read the book The girl who could fly bye Victoria forester.
This book was about a girl that wasn't that normal.She was born to a family that stayed in the same house for generations. When they had Piper they weren't that excited. At a small age during changing diapers piper started floating in the air. Her mother called Doc Bell for an immediate appointments. The doctor said she was fine until he saw her float. He said to let it go.
So they did. Piper was home schooled due to the fact she floated at age 5-7 Piper was curious about everything. She asked her mom many questions almost about every little thing she saw .Her mom told her to stop with the nonsense and get to work. But piper didn't give up she gave a whole speech to her dad about her questions and answers. Her dad didn't speak that much he just listened. When he listened to Piper he just got dizzy and stayed still. One day Piper realized a bird flying. Later that day when it was quiet and clear Piper went on the roof jumped off and started to fly she couldn't believe herself. When she got home her parents were furious. That's all i got to read because this book took me a while to understand.There is not much details. Next week i hope i will get to read a lot more!
Your friend,
Dana Yeoshoua
Last week i read the book The girl who could fly bye Victoria forester.
This book was about a girl that wasn't that normal.She was born to a family that stayed in the same house for generations. When they had Piper they weren't that excited. At a small age during changing diapers piper started floating in the air. Her mother called Doc Bell for an immediate appointments. The doctor said she was fine until he saw her float. He said to let it go.
So they did. Piper was home schooled due to the fact she floated at age 5-7 Piper was curious about everything. She asked her mom many questions almost about every little thing she saw .Her mom told her to stop with the nonsense and get to work. But piper didn't give up she gave a whole speech to her dad about her questions and answers. Her dad didn't speak that much he just listened. When he listened to Piper he just got dizzy and stayed still. One day Piper realized a bird flying. Later that day when it was quiet and clear Piper went on the roof jumped off and started to fly she couldn't believe herself. When she got home her parents were furious. That's all i got to read because this book took me a while to understand.There is not much details. Next week i hope i will get to read a lot more!
Your friend,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, November 28, 2011
RJ #13: free choice Matched by Ally Condle
Dear Gaby,
I wrote this for you because i know you read this book already. I didn't get the chance to read all of it but i pretty much read a lot.Cassia has a banquet to find out who her match is Which is the one she will spend her life with.
You can only have this banquet when you are 17. Cassia just turned 17 on the day of the banquet.She went with her bast friend, Xander. They went into the air train and told each other about their artifact they brought. Cassia had a gold box and Xander had cuff links.When they had got there they each went to their seats with their family.
First they had the food and then the desert. Cassia wanted to save some cake for her brother because he is to young to attend to a matched banquet. Cassia was one of the middle ones to be called up to see who her match is.Meanwhile she ate her cake because she didnt have anywhere to keep it for her brother.She waited a long time to be called. Finally she was called up and there was a familiar face, it was Xander.
But then the screen turned black and only after a couple minutes it turned on again it was still Xander but that never oftenly happened.cassia got her silver box with all the things she needs to know about her match. But she knows she doesn't need it because she knows all about Xander. When the banquet is over everyone is dismissed except for Cassia and Xander they tell them it is not usual for the screen to go black. They told them it might be because they know each other already.They will have different guides to follow.Cassia knew they will get married and have kids like the rest.They went on the train and they were both closer then they always were.When Cassia got home she stayed outside to think of all this.Then went into bed not wanting to end this special night.she takes a last peek in the silver box before going into bed. She sees the blue tablet the yellow tablet and the red tablet. she know what the blue and yellow mean but never the red.There was always rumors that it was bad.She stopped thinking about that went into bed and allowed herself to dream about Xander for the first time.
This is all i read i really like this book and i will read it until I`m done and hopefully i will get Crossed.Thank you for suggesting this book to me Gaby these are the kind of books i like!!!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
I wrote this for you because i know you read this book already. I didn't get the chance to read all of it but i pretty much read a lot.Cassia has a banquet to find out who her match is Which is the one she will spend her life with.
You can only have this banquet when you are 17. Cassia just turned 17 on the day of the banquet.She went with her bast friend, Xander. They went into the air train and told each other about their artifact they brought. Cassia had a gold box and Xander had cuff links.When they had got there they each went to their seats with their family.
First they had the food and then the desert. Cassia wanted to save some cake for her brother because he is to young to attend to a matched banquet. Cassia was one of the middle ones to be called up to see who her match is.Meanwhile she ate her cake because she didnt have anywhere to keep it for her brother.She waited a long time to be called. Finally she was called up and there was a familiar face, it was Xander.
But then the screen turned black and only after a couple minutes it turned on again it was still Xander but that never oftenly happened.cassia got her silver box with all the things she needs to know about her match. But she knows she doesn't need it because she knows all about Xander. When the banquet is over everyone is dismissed except for Cassia and Xander they tell them it is not usual for the screen to go black. They told them it might be because they know each other already.They will have different guides to follow.Cassia knew they will get married and have kids like the rest.They went on the train and they were both closer then they always were.When Cassia got home she stayed outside to think of all this.Then went into bed not wanting to end this special night.she takes a last peek in the silver box before going into bed. She sees the blue tablet the yellow tablet and the red tablet. she know what the blue and yellow mean but never the red.There was always rumors that it was bad.She stopped thinking about that went into bed and allowed herself to dream about Xander for the first time.
This is all i read i really like this book and i will read it until I`m done and hopefully i will get Crossed.Thank you for suggesting this book to me Gaby these are the kind of books i like!!!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, November 21, 2011
blog #12 - memoir Chicken soup for the soul of the america
Dear Orly,
last week i read the memoir Chicken soup for the soul of america.
My most favorite story was about a school project that a student had to do. he had to give someone that he honors a blue winner ribbon and tell him to do someone else. So he gave an employee at the office department one and told him to do another one for hima nd an extra for the other.The employee gave his boss one and told him he appreciates him.Then he gave him the extra ribbon to give someone else. The boss got home and called his son he gave him the ribbon and told him he is sorry for always screaming at him and never listening to him.
The son answer "' im happy you said that because i was planning on comitting suiscide tomorrow"'
When i read the last line i was shocked and happy at the same time. That project saved someones life and that teaches every one that even something small thats nice can make someones day.This is another reason im always nice :)! So take it seriously and try making someones day.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
last week i read the memoir Chicken soup for the soul of america.
My most favorite story was about a school project that a student had to do. he had to give someone that he honors a blue winner ribbon and tell him to do someone else. So he gave an employee at the office department one and told him to do another one for hima nd an extra for the other.The employee gave his boss one and told him he appreciates him.Then he gave him the extra ribbon to give someone else. The boss got home and called his son he gave him the ribbon and told him he is sorry for always screaming at him and never listening to him.
The son answer "' im happy you said that because i was planning on comitting suiscide tomorrow"'
When i read the last line i was shocked and happy at the same time. That project saved someones life and that teaches every one that even something small thats nice can make someones day.This is another reason im always nice :)! So take it seriously and try making someones day.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Tuesday, November 15, 2011
blog #11: Chicken soup to the souls of girls
Dear Sharon,
This week i read Chicken soup. I really liked the book it is very interesting reading other peoples experience especially that its for girls.The one story that i really liked was about a sixth grader (i don't remember her name)
that didn't grow like other girls.All the girls acted like teens. She was shocked and surprised.When it was P.E time the girls saw what she didn't grow like others.She was embarrassed.of course this got around the whole school and she got bullied by others. In math class she didn't even pay attention no one talked to her and didn't to others.Until her pencil fell and the girl that was heavier than others and had lots of acne picked it up for her. She told her she heard about what happened in p.e . then she told her that that's how people acted to her too. She helped the non-growing girl ignore the bullies and fight back after one week thanks too her she didn't get bullied one bit. She thanked her and they became very good friends.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
This week i read Chicken soup. I really liked the book it is very interesting reading other peoples experience especially that its for girls.The one story that i really liked was about a sixth grader (i don't remember her name)
that didn't grow like other girls.All the girls acted like teens. She was shocked and surprised.When it was P.E time the girls saw what she didn't grow like others.She was embarrassed.of course this got around the whole school and she got bullied by others. In math class she didn't even pay attention no one talked to her and didn't to others.Until her pencil fell and the girl that was heavier than others and had lots of acne picked it up for her. She told her she heard about what happened in p.e . then she told her that that's how people acted to her too. She helped the non-growing girl ignore the bullies and fight back after one week thanks too her she didn't get bullied one bit. She thanked her and they became very good friends.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Saturday, November 12, 2011
Date:11-12-11
Name:Dana Yeoshoua
Current Events Journal # 2
Title: A Legacy Of Service: Three generations of pines family have served the military
Author: Perry Stein
Source: The Miami Herald
The topic of the article is the generation of the Perez family in the military.
The main idea of the article is: Stated. It is that all 3 family members haave done incredible things in the military.
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to inform readers about the great things the perez family did in the military.
The author’s perspective in this article is objective/subjective (biased) because subjective because he is saying facts about them.
The pattern of organization of the article is organized in quotes then facts and what happened then.
The reason the author chose this pattern for the article is for us to understand easier what happened at that time and what each ones thinks about it.
The text features included in the article are: Photo and caption helps by understanding whos who helps by understanding the process and whats going on, and helps by gaining more knowledge.
This article is about (a summary in your words) Bolivar Perez-Rios which did many things in the military. Like helping many people survive in the explosion in 1944 Christmas eve and not giving up the military. His son after him was like him and did those kind of things.His grandson is still in the military as usual helping America. His great-grandson is planning great military careers.
The significance (importance) of this article is that anyone can do anything and that you understand what every little thing can make a big change.
What I learned from this article is that what comes around in the family stays around the whole family like the perez family.
What I liked about this article is that it had many facts that i didnt know at all.
What I did not like about it that it had some confusing things that made me think harder.
Who should read this article and why? I think soldiers and veterans should read this article because it will give them confidence.
This article reminds me of my cousin that go to the army in israel.
This reminds me of the time i read "Facts About the Military.
All the different armies in the world.
New vocabulary I learned was memorabilia.
Word Context Clues Meaning
1.mementos
2.i grew up listening to his stories
3.influenced
Name:Dana Yeoshoua
Current Events Journal # 2
Title: A Legacy Of Service: Three generations of pines family have served the military
Author: Perry Stein
Source: The Miami Herald
The topic of the article is the generation of the Perez family in the military.
The main idea of the article is: Stated. It is that all 3 family members haave done incredible things in the military.
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to inform readers about the great things the perez family did in the military.
The author’s perspective in this article is objective/subjective (biased) because subjective because he is saying facts about them.
The pattern of organization of the article is organized in quotes then facts and what happened then.
The reason the author chose this pattern for the article is for us to understand easier what happened at that time and what each ones thinks about it.
The text features included in the article are: Photo and caption helps by understanding whos who helps by understanding the process and whats going on, and helps by gaining more knowledge.
This article is about (a summary in your words) Bolivar Perez-Rios which did many things in the military. Like helping many people survive in the explosion in 1944 Christmas eve and not giving up the military. His son after him was like him and did those kind of things.His grandson is still in the military as usual helping America. His great-grandson is planning great military careers.
The significance (importance) of this article is that anyone can do anything and that you understand what every little thing can make a big change.
What I learned from this article is that what comes around in the family stays around the whole family like the perez family.
What I liked about this article is that it had many facts that i didnt know at all.
What I did not like about it that it had some confusing things that made me think harder.
Who should read this article and why? I think soldiers and veterans should read this article because it will give them confidence.
This article reminds me of my cousin that go to the army in israel.
This reminds me of the time i read "Facts About the Military.
All the different armies in the world.
New vocabulary I learned was memorabilia.
Word Context Clues Meaning
1.mementos
2.i grew up listening to his stories
3.influenced
Monday, November 7, 2011
blog #10: short-stories O'henry short stories.
Dear Sara,
I am writing this to you because you told me about O'henry stories. I read many short stories, but there was one that really talked to me.
Its about a young man who lived with his wealthy parents. One day he told his father that he wants to go to military. His father said " go and never give up no matter what you have to sacrifice"
He left to military. After a couple years the civil war had come. his left foot and leg were on the street and the rest of his body was on the sidewalk. he woke up and didn't understand what was happening. he saw his horse was waiting for him. he tried standing up but he fell back down. he stayed on the floor for a while. When he finally got up someone vicious on a black horse shot his leg and he , Chris, landed in the bushes. When he was awake he somehow remembered about how his dad told him not to give up no matter what. Chris got back up and stared limping. someone saw him so he hid in the same bush he fell in. But it was his friend that was in military to. His name was Steve. He helped Chris hide to a safe place he stayed for a couple minutes and went back to the fight. Chris was lonely. When the war was over no one came to get Chris. Until, someone knocked on the wall, it was one of his peers in the military, Ben. He helped Chris out and all he saw was injured people and people dead on the floor including Steve. There were lots of people left but lots of people gone too. this part almost made me cry. After years of medical help Chris could walk again. This story really talked and related to me because i have lots of cousins that are in the Israeli army. Thank g-d they are all in one piece and healthy.Thank you Sara again for the help of finding this.
Love,
Dana yeoshoua
Monday, October 31, 2011
blog #9 The Dark Divine
Dear Adi,
This is the 2nd part read for this book. So read the other blog to understnd. Grace found Daniel at the car he fixed it for her.After a couple dates with Pete she thought its not going to work so she said no to the dance.She researched daniels name because she was very curios and found out it means death of a dog in latin.she was very scared .DANIEL IS A WEREWOLF. Thats why Jude came back withhis own blood covered on him. Thats why Daniel was taken then brought back,thats why grace had to stay with her grandma and charity for 3 weeks. This means Jude and daniel lied to her.She got really mad. The next day for the festival her dad did every year she had to sing with charity the song of Marrylous because she died.When the day came they all got ready for the festival and when people got settled for Grace and Charitys performance everything starte to get wrong.Charity got hurt Jude was stuck in the road no one was ok except for Grace. then Daniel showed up and tried to help nbut Graace told him to just leave. because she was scared she knew he was controlling all this. Suddenly Jude showed up and knew what to do he fixed everything. This meant war to daniel.They fought with daniels gang of wolves and immortals while the rest of the divines were the other side(good).Of course the Divines won and everything turned out ok.Daniel was destroyed into billion little pieces.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
This is the 2nd part read for this book. So read the other blog to understnd. Grace found Daniel at the car he fixed it for her.After a couple dates with Pete she thought its not going to work so she said no to the dance.She researched daniels name because she was very curios and found out it means death of a dog in latin.she was very scared .DANIEL IS A WEREWOLF. Thats why Jude came back withhis own blood covered on him. Thats why Daniel was taken then brought back,thats why grace had to stay with her grandma and charity for 3 weeks. This means Jude and daniel lied to her.She got really mad. The next day for the festival her dad did every year she had to sing with charity the song of Marrylous because she died.When the day came they all got ready for the festival and when people got settled for Grace and Charitys performance everything starte to get wrong.Charity got hurt Jude was stuck in the road no one was ok except for Grace. then Daniel showed up and tried to help nbut Graace told him to just leave. because she was scared she knew he was controlling all this. Suddenly Jude showed up and knew what to do he fixed everything. This meant war to daniel.They fought with daniels gang of wolves and immortals while the rest of the divines were the other side(good).Of course the Divines won and everything turned out ok.Daniel was destroyed into billion little pieces.
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Saturday, October 29, 2011
Current Event #1
Date:10-29-11
Name: Dana Yeoshoua
Current Events Journal
Title: Will Steve Jobs final vendetta haunt google ?
Author: Michael Liedtke
Source: The Miami Herald
The topic of the article is the competition on google and Steve Jobs apple.
The main idea of the article is:(implied/stated)Implied
The author’s purpose for writing this article is to inform readers what Steve Jobs had to go through before his sickness
The author’s perspective in this article is objective (biased) because does not live with Jobs so he doesnt see his daily life.
The pattern of organization of the article is organized in sections of different topics and events.
The reason the author chose this pattern for the article is because he wrote it in newspaper style.
The text features included in the article are:Things they said helps by picturing what happened which helps by breaking down the events into smaller steps , and helps by understanding the article better.
This article is about Steve Jobs and google had a disagreement about their android that it is copied from Jobs ideas like the ipod or iphone.They later shut it down, but after awhile they opened it again but as a free system
and that made apple lose customers.They tried to fight it but it didn't work.
The significance (importance) of this article is that all companies have their competition.
What I learned from this article is: That google is not only a web it may compete with other companies for technology.I never knew google has competition.
What I liked about this article is that it tells how Steve Jobs never gave up fighting for his customers.
What I did not like about it that all this companies have these competitions in the first place.
Who should read this article and why. I think my dad would like this because he is in to Apple.
This article reminds me of (text-to-self) My dads phone.
(text-to-text) When Google and Facebook were compared
(text-to-world) Steve wonders death.
New vocabulary I learned
~manifesto
~retaliated
Word Context Clues Meaning
1.Profane
2.ed at the end meaning its a verb
3.'"in his biography"'
Monday, October 24, 2011
blog #8:The Dark Devine
Dear Orly,
this book is very interesting.It is about a girl named Grace Divine she has an older brother jude a younger sister Charity and a little brother Ryan.Her dad has something to do with the prinister. Grace has a best friend Annie.
Jude had a best friend since the age of 2 named Daniel When he was 15 he moved in with them after 1or 2 years he came back from somewhere with his own blood and then disapearred. Jude was sad and promised neverr tot tell anyone about this. Daniel and Grace always teased eachother but flirted at the same time they were in love.
grace had to stay at her grandmothers with Charity for 3 weeks because of this.
middle of Junior year:
Grace and Annie were going to art class while annie was telling her how hot the new kid is. When they got to class someone was sitting in her seat. She walked over to him and said "I think you're sitting in my seat"
really he answered and he grabbed her art project
"Hey give me that"
he fixed the knots "kiss me"
"Who do you think you are"
he looked up and it was him Daniel.he always used to tell her to kiss him but it never happened.
When she told her family about this they changed it to a different subject.They promised never to say that name or talk about him.Jude got up. she went after him.She said sorry he was really sad about what happened.
Next day Pete,one of Judes and graces friends,asked Grace on a date she said yes.
After school he came to help her dad with packing the boxes for the poor and drove to the bowling alley with Grace.the car broke down and he had to walk to the gas station Grace stayed in the car in the most dangerous city in town.thats where i got and next week i will have more!
this book is very interesting.It is about a girl named Grace Divine she has an older brother jude a younger sister Charity and a little brother Ryan.Her dad has something to do with the prinister. Grace has a best friend Annie.
Jude had a best friend since the age of 2 named Daniel When he was 15 he moved in with them after 1or 2 years he came back from somewhere with his own blood and then disapearred. Jude was sad and promised neverr tot tell anyone about this. Daniel and Grace always teased eachother but flirted at the same time they were in love.
grace had to stay at her grandmothers with Charity for 3 weeks because of this.
middle of Junior year:
Grace and Annie were going to art class while annie was telling her how hot the new kid is. When they got to class someone was sitting in her seat. She walked over to him and said "I think you're sitting in my seat"
really he answered and he grabbed her art project
"Hey give me that"
he fixed the knots "kiss me"
"Who do you think you are"
he looked up and it was him Daniel.he always used to tell her to kiss him but it never happened.
When she told her family about this they changed it to a different subject.They promised never to say that name or talk about him.Jude got up. she went after him.She said sorry he was really sad about what happened.
Next day Pete,one of Judes and graces friends,asked Grace on a date she said yes.
After school he came to help her dad with packing the boxes for the poor and drove to the bowling alley with Grace.the car broke down and he had to walk to the gas station Grace stayed in the car in the most dangerous city in town.thats where i got and next week i will have more!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, October 17, 2011
Reading journal #7: Justin Bieber
Dear Dore,
I wrote this for you because I know that you are obsessed with Justin Bieber!
So in this book it all about him, how he started, who discovered him and many other things.
I never got this interested in a biography!
So i now know that he was discovered my Scooter Braun ( now his manager).
Justin gives me the confidence to believe in myself and go with what my heart tells me too! Here they give me some things that others celebrities said about him and everyone was so nice except for Miley Cyrus, she said she doesn't like his music so she doesn't listen to it.That's why I don't like her.well Justin had lots of lovers and haters.But lets get to the beginning. Justin was born March 1st, 1994 in Ontario Canada.his parents divorced when he was really small, but he still contacts his dad.well he posted videos on YouTube and got lots of viewers including Scooter Braun. Braun called Pattie, Justin's mom,and told her that Justin's git talent and he wants to meet. Pattie thought it was a joke at first but he was serious. so he flew them to Atlanta. when they got there they met and agreed Justin began but when he saw usher he couldn't resist not showing him his music. but usher put him down and rejected Justin. a while later braun called up usher to show him Justin's talent ad so they did and he loved it, but usher had competition between Justin timber lake. after one song Justin became the most popular teen pop star EVER!!! He got so much fans after nothing. Justin bieber is really talented i don't understand those haters out there! i think Justin taught us all that if you follow your dream it will come true just like Justin's did!So Dore you are right Justin is great everyone should like him not like you but a little! i believe he has great music and i admit i listen to him 24/7! well hope you liked my RJ bye<3!!!
I wrote this for you because I know that you are obsessed with Justin Bieber!
So in this book it all about him, how he started, who discovered him and many other things.
I never got this interested in a biography!
So i now know that he was discovered my Scooter Braun ( now his manager).
Justin gives me the confidence to believe in myself and go with what my heart tells me too! Here they give me some things that others celebrities said about him and everyone was so nice except for Miley Cyrus, she said she doesn't like his music so she doesn't listen to it.That's why I don't like her.well Justin had lots of lovers and haters.But lets get to the beginning. Justin was born March 1st, 1994 in Ontario Canada.his parents divorced when he was really small, but he still contacts his dad.well he posted videos on YouTube and got lots of viewers including Scooter Braun. Braun called Pattie, Justin's mom,and told her that Justin's git talent and he wants to meet. Pattie thought it was a joke at first but he was serious. so he flew them to Atlanta. when they got there they met and agreed Justin began but when he saw usher he couldn't resist not showing him his music. but usher put him down and rejected Justin. a while later braun called up usher to show him Justin's talent ad so they did and he loved it, but usher had competition between Justin timber lake. after one song Justin became the most popular teen pop star EVER!!! He got so much fans after nothing. Justin bieber is really talented i don't understand those haters out there! i think Justin taught us all that if you follow your dream it will come true just like Justin's did!So Dore you are right Justin is great everyone should like him not like you but a little! i believe he has great music and i admit i listen to him 24/7! well hope you liked my RJ bye<3!!!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, October 10, 2011
Blog #6:Selena Gomez All Access By: Riley Brook
Dear Gaby,
I don't know if you like Selena Gomez but I do she is my favorite.She was born in Texas. Her mom and dad divorced when she was little. Her mom was an actress. That's where Selena got her talent. When Selena was 7 she went to audition for Barney and she got in there she met her best friend Demi Lavoto. She then wanted to continue with her career and got in Disney channel but before that she was in a couple movies. Selena got into a new show that they wanted to start, Wizard of Waverly Place. But they needed to check if the people liked it. The show worked and she got in after a lot of episodes they made a movie about it. Her and Demi were both in Disney so they would meet a lot. Some other friends Selena made were David Henri and Jake t Austin David as Justin Russo and Jake as max Russo Selena played the only girl (except for mom ) Alex Russo.
Its about 3 siblings that are wizards from their dads side but he is no longer a wizard because he gave his powers to is brother in order to marry a mortal. While she was doing that they put her in other shows for 1 or 2 episodes in like suite life of Zack and Cody or Hannah Montana. Well that's it Selena now has great vocation you see how I used our vocab words. so hope you enjoyed bye!
I don't know if you like Selena Gomez but I do she is my favorite.She was born in Texas. Her mom and dad divorced when she was little. Her mom was an actress. That's where Selena got her talent. When Selena was 7 she went to audition for Barney and she got in there she met her best friend Demi Lavoto. She then wanted to continue with her career and got in Disney channel but before that she was in a couple movies. Selena got into a new show that they wanted to start, Wizard of Waverly Place. But they needed to check if the people liked it. The show worked and she got in after a lot of episodes they made a movie about it. Her and Demi were both in Disney so they would meet a lot. Some other friends Selena made were David Henri and Jake t Austin David as Justin Russo and Jake as max Russo Selena played the only girl (except for mom ) Alex Russo.
Its about 3 siblings that are wizards from their dads side but he is no longer a wizard because he gave his powers to is brother in order to marry a mortal. While she was doing that they put her in other shows for 1 or 2 episodes in like suite life of Zack and Cody or Hannah Montana. Well that's it Selena now has great vocation you see how I used our vocab words. so hope you enjoyed bye!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, October 3, 2011
Blog #5:Princess collection book#2 Disney
Dear Adi,
This week i read a fairytale about royalty.
One of my favorite story was lion king. This is because this is a very sad story but has a happy ending.
Its about a new lion born that his dad is the king. His uncle,Scar is evil because he wants to be king and tries to kill the cub, Simba, and the king, Mufasa. Simba cant wait to be king. But when Scar kills Mufasa he runs away and doesn't come back. Everyone thinks he is dead like Mufasa. So Scar becomes king.When Nala Simbas best friend since babies, left to find help and found Simba. He didn't want to go back.simba found his dad best friend baboon and he tells him he needs to go back so he does. He kills Scar and become king.
I love this story because it has a happy ending that falls all into place. My favorite part is when Simba goes back kills Scar and takes his place as king. My least favorite part is when Mufasa dies because he didn't deserve it. My favorite character was Rafici the baboon because he is very funny. My least favorite character is Scar because he is evil.The theme is never give up in what you dreamed of doing.
Well thetas it i hope you liked my blog!!
This week i read a fairytale about royalty.
One of my favorite story was lion king. This is because this is a very sad story but has a happy ending.
Its about a new lion born that his dad is the king. His uncle,Scar is evil because he wants to be king and tries to kill the cub, Simba, and the king, Mufasa. Simba cant wait to be king. But when Scar kills Mufasa he runs away and doesn't come back. Everyone thinks he is dead like Mufasa. So Scar becomes king.When Nala Simbas best friend since babies, left to find help and found Simba. He didn't want to go back.simba found his dad best friend baboon and he tells him he needs to go back so he does. He kills Scar and become king.
I love this story because it has a happy ending that falls all into place. My favorite part is when Simba goes back kills Scar and takes his place as king. My least favorite part is when Mufasa dies because he didn't deserve it. My favorite character was Rafici the baboon because he is very funny. My least favorite character is Scar because he is evil.The theme is never give up in what you dreamed of doing.
Well thetas it i hope you liked my blog!!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, September 26, 2011
Blog #4 : Princess collection Disney
Dear Dore ,
when you grow up i hope you read this book. You can be the prince.Now I'll tell you about some stories in it.
Ariel's true love:
Ariel is a mermaid and she loves humans and their things.She collects human objects.her dad is king of the ocean.She saves a prince (human) but her dad grounds her to never get out of her room.She sneaks out to Ursula witch of the sea.She makes a deal to be a human for 3 days but with out her beautiful voice which is how the prince only remembers her. She agrees and goes out. He almost kissed her but Ursula's eels pushed the boat they were in and they didn't kiss. Ursula took Ariel's voice and acted like she was the girl that saved the prince.He about to get married with Ursula.But Ariel stole her voice started singing and He got married to her.
Beauty and the beast An enchanted place:
There is an ordinary girl and her dad is kidnapped by a beast and she goes to find him. when she finds him she trades herself in in stead of her dad. She lives there a couple months and falls in love with the beast she breaks the spell and they live happily ever after.
A bugs life for the love f a princess:
There is an inventor ant and he tries to help all ants gather food for the mean grasshoppers.
He in accident makes all food fall and go away. Everyone get mad at him they get in trouble from the grasshoppers. he goes to get help to defeat the grasshoppers.He gets circus bugs and lies they are warriors. When they found out they got mad at him and they tell him to leave again. Atta in the meanwhile falls in love with him she is the princess but she is still strict. He comes back to help and actually defeats the grasshoppers.
My favorite book was Bugs life because it is different than all other princess stories.
My least favorite was Mulan because she doesn't fit in. the theme is always believe in yourself.
Well that's it next week i will have more stories.
love,
Dana Yeoshoua
when you grow up i hope you read this book. You can be the prince.Now I'll tell you about some stories in it.
Ariel's true love:
Ariel is a mermaid and she loves humans and their things.She collects human objects.her dad is king of the ocean.She saves a prince (human) but her dad grounds her to never get out of her room.She sneaks out to Ursula witch of the sea.She makes a deal to be a human for 3 days but with out her beautiful voice which is how the prince only remembers her. She agrees and goes out. He almost kissed her but Ursula's eels pushed the boat they were in and they didn't kiss. Ursula took Ariel's voice and acted like she was the girl that saved the prince.He about to get married with Ursula.But Ariel stole her voice started singing and He got married to her.
Beauty and the beast An enchanted place:
There is an ordinary girl and her dad is kidnapped by a beast and she goes to find him. when she finds him she trades herself in in stead of her dad. She lives there a couple months and falls in love with the beast she breaks the spell and they live happily ever after.
A bugs life for the love f a princess:
There is an inventor ant and he tries to help all ants gather food for the mean grasshoppers.
He in accident makes all food fall and go away. Everyone get mad at him they get in trouble from the grasshoppers. he goes to get help to defeat the grasshoppers.He gets circus bugs and lies they are warriors. When they found out they got mad at him and they tell him to leave again. Atta in the meanwhile falls in love with him she is the princess but she is still strict. He comes back to help and actually defeats the grasshoppers.
My favorite book was Bugs life because it is different than all other princess stories.
My least favorite was Mulan because she doesn't fit in. the theme is always believe in yourself.
Well that's it next week i will have more stories.
love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, September 19, 2011
Blog #3: Riding Freedom By:Pam Mun`oz Ryan
Dear Sharon,
This book is one of my favorite books because it gives a very important message. Also because is very interesting.Here is the main characters:
The setting is the orphanage California, Missouri,the streets.1800s.
So Charlotte is fired from horse duty and given kitchen chores.The next day her favorite horse,Freedom, dies,they were really close .In the afternoon Hayward is adopted.Charlotte has bad luck so she decides to run away as a boy.She cut her hair and put her clothes in the river like she drowned.Vern helps her get away with it. The next day Charlotte woke up in Ebeneezer's stables.She decides to call herself Charley.Ebeneezer hires Charley to be his rider after years of training. She was the best driver in the state. After lots of years of riding Frank and James offer her to move with them to California.She goes and gets a very bad injury in her eye. She became blind in one eye. But she did not give up riding. She was the best and safest rider in California too.Hayward comes to visit and may move in with her like they wanted as little kids.Ebeneezer decides to move with her. Years later she heard that Vern has passed away. Her horse gave birth to twins one female one male.As Vern had said names are very important.She called the male Vern's thunder and the female Freedom.Charlotte still hasn't told anyone she was a girl on Ebeneezer, Hayward, and Vern new.
The rising action was when she moves to California and cant ride yet.
The conflict/climax is when she gets hit by a horse on her left eye and is blind on that eye.
The falling action is when she teaches herself again how to ride and gets better.
The resolution is when she has a test and she passes.
My personal opinion is that Charlotta is a very sweet strong loving brave girl.I would like to be like her in many ways. My favorite part is when Charlotte gets to see Hayward again and her life starts getting into place.
My least favorite part is when she gets hit in the eye because she doesn't deserve to.My second least favorite part is when Charlotte has to say goodbye to Hayward as kids because they were really close and i wouldn't like to lose a friend to.Well that's it i hoped you liked it `cause i certainly did!
This book is one of my favorite books because it gives a very important message. Also because is very interesting.Here is the main characters:
- Charlotte
- Ebeneezer
- Hayward
- Vern
- James
- Frank
- Mr.Millshark
The setting is the orphanage California, Missouri,the streets.1800s.
So Charlotte is fired from horse duty and given kitchen chores.The next day her favorite horse,Freedom, dies,they were really close .In the afternoon Hayward is adopted.Charlotte has bad luck so she decides to run away as a boy.She cut her hair and put her clothes in the river like she drowned.Vern helps her get away with it. The next day Charlotte woke up in Ebeneezer's stables.She decides to call herself Charley.Ebeneezer hires Charley to be his rider after years of training. She was the best driver in the state. After lots of years of riding Frank and James offer her to move with them to California.She goes and gets a very bad injury in her eye. She became blind in one eye. But she did not give up riding. She was the best and safest rider in California too.Hayward comes to visit and may move in with her like they wanted as little kids.Ebeneezer decides to move with her. Years later she heard that Vern has passed away. Her horse gave birth to twins one female one male.As Vern had said names are very important.She called the male Vern's thunder and the female Freedom.Charlotte still hasn't told anyone she was a girl on Ebeneezer, Hayward, and Vern new.
The rising action was when she moves to California and cant ride yet.
The conflict/climax is when she gets hit by a horse on her left eye and is blind on that eye.
The falling action is when she teaches herself again how to ride and gets better.
The resolution is when she has a test and she passes.
My personal opinion is that Charlotta is a very sweet strong loving brave girl.I would like to be like her in many ways. My favorite part is when Charlotte gets to see Hayward again and her life starts getting into place.
My least favorite part is when she gets hit in the eye because she doesn't deserve to.My second least favorite part is when Charlotte has to say goodbye to Hayward as kids because they were really close and i wouldn't like to lose a friend to.Well that's it i hoped you liked it `cause i certainly did!
Love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Monday, September 12, 2011
Blog #2 Diary of A Wimpy Kid Jeff Kinney
Dear Orly,
I read the book Diary of A Wimpy Kid The Ugly Truth.This was a very interesting book.
Here are the characters that were mostly in the book:
This takes place in school,Greg's house,streets.this takes place in I would say,2010.past. Hot days.
So Greg sometimes takes advantage of Rowley and he gets mad so they have a big fight and aren't friends anymore. Greg mostly has only Rowley. Rowley gets friends really fast and Greg never gets friends.Well its summer and he doesn't know what to do so he goes to a sleepover that is at school. Greg is happy to be with the girl he likes, Hailey. It turns out they separate the boys and the girls.They only get together if the chaperons have some little games for kindergartners.
The rising action is when Rowley and Greg have their first little fight.When Rowley drags him to the top of the hill with a wagon.The climax of the story is when Rowley and Greg have their big fight and decide not to be friends.That is the conflict that Greg has no one to be with.The falling action is when Greg starts being nice to Rowley.The resolution is that they start talking to each other, and forgive each other.
While all of this is happening at home Greg is annoyed by Randy and tortured by Rodrick. His parents punish him for every little thing.
My personal opinion is that friends should never fight because u never know what will happen the next day.
I feel happy that Rowley found friends but what about Greg think about what he is going through.
My favorite part is when they become friends again because I don't like fighting.My least favorite part is when Rowley makes new friends and rubs it in Greg's face maybe he is not his friend that doesn't mean he needs to make him jealous of what he has and he doesn't. The theme is friends are never perfect. Well that's it remember Orly I love you and I hope we never fight like them and I love you all!!
love,
I read the book Diary of A Wimpy Kid The Ugly Truth.This was a very interesting book.
Here are the characters that were mostly in the book:
- Greg
- Rowley
- Mom
- Randy
- Rodrick
- Dad
- Classmates/Teachers
This takes place in school,Greg's house,streets.this takes place in I would say,2010.past. Hot days.
So Greg sometimes takes advantage of Rowley and he gets mad so they have a big fight and aren't friends anymore. Greg mostly has only Rowley. Rowley gets friends really fast and Greg never gets friends.Well its summer and he doesn't know what to do so he goes to a sleepover that is at school. Greg is happy to be with the girl he likes, Hailey. It turns out they separate the boys and the girls.They only get together if the chaperons have some little games for kindergartners.
The rising action is when Rowley and Greg have their first little fight.When Rowley drags him to the top of the hill with a wagon.The climax of the story is when Rowley and Greg have their big fight and decide not to be friends.That is the conflict that Greg has no one to be with.The falling action is when Greg starts being nice to Rowley.The resolution is that they start talking to each other, and forgive each other.
While all of this is happening at home Greg is annoyed by Randy and tortured by Rodrick. His parents punish him for every little thing.
My personal opinion is that friends should never fight because u never know what will happen the next day.
I feel happy that Rowley found friends but what about Greg think about what he is going through.
My favorite part is when they become friends again because I don't like fighting.My least favorite part is when Rowley makes new friends and rubs it in Greg's face maybe he is not his friend that doesn't mean he needs to make him jealous of what he has and he doesn't. The theme is friends are never perfect. Well that's it remember Orly I love you and I hope we never fight like them and I love you all!!
love,
Dana Yeoshoua
Tuesday, September 6, 2011
blog #1 Book:Eggs Author:Jerry Spinelli
Dear Mrs.Zrihen,
I'm going to tell you about my book eggs.first I'll tell you the characters, they are:
On the other side we have Primrose that does not know where her dad is she never saw him. She lives on her moms drive way inside a truck she is embarrassed to live with her mom because the mom (Madame Dufee)claims she knows the future.John is Primroses and Davids "friend" he works at a workshop. Every late night David and Primrose go to his workshop/home and watch TV or do whatever they want.
This takes place in Pennsylvania.Johns house, the park, Davids house, Primroses house, and the streets.This takes place in March 2009.They were in different places each time.
The problems start when Primrose and David begin fighting on the streets at midnight.When they go to Johns house they fight a lot.The biggest change was when Primrose faked to be Davids mom so they could go to the mother child Halloween party.This is when Primrose screams at David like a real mother and starts hitting him.he screams "you're not my mother!" and runs out crying holding her wig in his hand.The conflict was that they get into a serious big fight in front of all the mothers.
Its starts falling in to place when primrose sneaks into his room and they talk all about the big fight and they discuss everything they did.The resolution was that Primrose snuck into his house and made him laugh and feel comfortable that's how they made up.
My opinion is that friends are not perfect they will always fight but they will have to make up again.Primrose and David are an example but there are many people out there with the same situation.For the whole story I felt sad for David that his mother is not there for him when there is hard times.
My favorite part in the story was when Primrose and David became friends again .This is because I don't like fighting with anyone or seeing someone fight with another and when people make up that makes me happy.
My least favorite was when Primrose convinced David to steal peoples things at night. he did what she told him and she did the same. That made me mad because Primrose might be naughty but David is a good kid.
Well that's all I have to tell you. You should really read the book it if very touching.
I'm going to tell you about my book eggs.first I'll tell you the characters, they are:
- David
- Primrose
- John
- mother (Primrose)
- grandmother (David)
- father (David)
On the other side we have Primrose that does not know where her dad is she never saw him. She lives on her moms drive way inside a truck she is embarrassed to live with her mom because the mom (Madame Dufee)claims she knows the future.John is Primroses and Davids "friend" he works at a workshop. Every late night David and Primrose go to his workshop/home and watch TV or do whatever they want.
This takes place in Pennsylvania.Johns house, the park, Davids house, Primroses house, and the streets.This takes place in March 2009.They were in different places each time.
The problems start when Primrose and David begin fighting on the streets at midnight.When they go to Johns house they fight a lot.The biggest change was when Primrose faked to be Davids mom so they could go to the mother child Halloween party.This is when Primrose screams at David like a real mother and starts hitting him.he screams "you're not my mother!" and runs out crying holding her wig in his hand.The conflict was that they get into a serious big fight in front of all the mothers.
Its starts falling in to place when primrose sneaks into his room and they talk all about the big fight and they discuss everything they did.The resolution was that Primrose snuck into his house and made him laugh and feel comfortable that's how they made up.
My opinion is that friends are not perfect they will always fight but they will have to make up again.Primrose and David are an example but there are many people out there with the same situation.For the whole story I felt sad for David that his mother is not there for him when there is hard times.
My favorite part in the story was when Primrose and David became friends again .This is because I don't like fighting with anyone or seeing someone fight with another and when people make up that makes me happy.
My least favorite was when Primrose convinced David to steal peoples things at night. he did what she told him and she did the same. That made me mad because Primrose might be naughty but David is a good kid.
Well that's all I have to tell you. You should really read the book it if very touching.
Sincerely,
Dana Yeoshoua
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